Atlantis
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The water was rising. Soon, everything would be underwater Atlantis was a very famous and beautiful city in the Bahamas. Atlantis Paradise Island is an ocean-themed resort on Paradise Island in the Bahamas.
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The thousands of lights that sparkled against the dark backdrop of the colossal skyscrapers were being extinguished one by one, as the monstrous buildings were gradually disappearing under the dark tides banished to a watery grave beneath the lonely depths The water rose, under the water was multicoloured fish, coral, turtle and a diver
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People were confused, they didn’t who the diver was under the water or what he was doing in the water, the diver was wearing a pitch-blacks swimsuit, aqua underwater shoes and a snorkel to help him breathe. Three also was an edible green turtle with a big shell that was green, small neck, small head and vivid eyes.
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No one knew what had caused the flood but people were thinking there might be a real city somewhere in the ocean, waiting to be discovered, But others thought it was just the rain and some even thought there were mermaids and they even might have an underwater house.
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There was so much noise. Everyone was terrified they all were thinking about how all this water was going to go away and if it was going to go away how long was it going to take or the water might not even go away and how were they going to get out of the city all these thoughts raced through peoples heads.
I like all the descriptive words you have used in your writing Sana, keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHere are some of the words/phrases in your writing that stood out to me: colossal, monstrous, banished, watery grave, lonely depths, vivid eyes, raced through people's heads, terrified.
Hi Sana, your writing was quite informative! - Mrs Taege
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