Fireworks!
I ran to the cupboard and grabbed my fireworks box. Shriek, shriek, the plastic sounded noisily as I ripped open the box. My mum safely placed the firework on the floor… boom, pop, bang, it went. Then... boom, boom, boom!
A bright burning flame rushed to the sky pop, boom!
good job Sana! I like the way you explained how you took out the plastic bag and how you crunched it. Next time add more details to your poem.
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