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I woke up hanging in my tree, I am round, red, plethoric, juicy and ready to be eaten, which I am not ready for. Ahhh, I heard the meerkats coming and hoped they didn’t see me. Ohh great, they were already coming towards me and they were climbing my tree without asking, how rude! They all started hugging me one by one. No offence but they smelt quite bad.
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But suddenly they all started running away. What happened, did I do something wrong? No, it was the vulture again. The vulture had a big dark body, it was really big and it had a scarlet-coloured face. It stood still for a while but then he grabbed me and flew extremely fast. When I looked back I saw the meerkats running after me, they wanted to save me but why? They had made a big line from the vulture’s foot to the ground. The bird was shaking, to try to make the meerkats fall but the meerkats were holding really tight from the vulture’s foot. But suddenly we all flew off the vulture but one kind meerkat caught me. However, how extremely rude, he started throwing me around to the other meerkats. Sadly the vulture caught me again and the meerkats jumped on the vulture once again and they made the vulture unbalanced and shaky. The meerkats were shaking to make the vulture fall and suddenly the vulture fell and bashed into a rock face. The meerkats grabbed me and we all landed safely on the ground. Then they started to throw me around then the biggest meerkat grabbed me and kicked me and I landed with a smoosh. It was the end of my life.
