Sunday, September 1, 2019

three little pigs

intro
Hi my name is Aurora and I am known as the big bad wolf in The Three Little Pigs story.  I'm sure you all know this popular fairytale but its all FAKE!  I am here today to tell you the true story.

Paragraph 2- making cake for granny and  getting the ingredients  

One day, I was wanting to make a cake for my lovely grandmother for her birthday.  I was wanting to make her feel loved. I was a bit sick and I had a cold but I thought I would still be able to make my cake. I took out all my ingredients from the cupboard and fridge. I took out my milk, butter, sugar, flour and eggs.  Firstly, I put in the milk then I put in flour and I was just about to put in my sugar when I noticed that there wasn’t any.  I thought my lovely pig neighbours wouldn’t mind giving me some so I set off towards the first house.


Paragraph 3- going and getting sugar from the first little pig 
 I walked to the first little pig’s house, it was made from straw.  Seriously, who would make a house from straw? Anyway, I went and I called, “Little pig, little pig are you in?”
 But there was no answer and I didn't want to go in someone's house without them knowing.  I was just about to leave when my nose got itchy so I huffed and I snuffed and I sneezed a great sneeze.  The house was not strong enough so it blew down. The little pig was on the floor, dead! I didn’t want to waste perfectly good meat that was as tasty as a hamburger so I gobbled him up.  But sadly I didn't get flour from the first little, mean pig’s house so I went to the next pig’s house.


Paragraph 4- going to the second little pig’s house

I went to the second little pigs house which was fragile and weak as it was made from wood.  Again I called, “Little pig little pig are you in?  I want some sugar to bake a cake for my grandmother's birthday.‘’ 
‘’No go away, I won't give you sugar.. go away wolf’’
So my nose got itchy again so I shaved and I snapped and I sneezed a jolly good sneeze.  The second little pig's house was also not strong enough so it blew down and the second little pig was on the floor, dead as a doornail.  It would be crazy to waste a perfectly good meal so I ate him up.  I could eat all day but I had to make a cake so I went to the third little pig’s house.

Paragraph 5- going to the third pig’s house
This was my last house to go to so hopefully I had better luck.  I walked over to the third little pigs house, it was strong as it was made out of brick.  I called ’little pig little pig are you in I need some sugar to make a cake for my grandmother's birthday’’
 ‘’go away wolf I don't want to give you flour’’
I wanted to go but my nose got itchy once again so I huffed and I snuffed and I sneezed a very big sneeze but the house was strong and it didn't blow down. But still I had no sugar I didn't want to give my grandmother a cake that's dough and un sweet. 



Paragraph 6- councloution

To sum up, I didn't get any sugar from those mean, selfish pig’s but at least I had a good time with my grandmother we enjoyed the afternoon together and we had fun. 










Sunday, August 18, 2019

task- write an acrostic poem about the three parrots

The Three Parrots 

Tahi, Rua and Toru were siblings
Her brothers thought they were the most beautiful birds in the forest
Every bird in the forest grew tired of them squabbling over who was better looking.


Tahi said, “My feathers are softer than yours.” 
His brother disagreed with his opinion
Rua tried everything to make her brothers stop arguing
Everytime Rua tried to make her brothers get along, they just laughed at her and mocked her.
Everyone said the brothers were ruining the forest. 

Pretty and perfect, Tahi and Toru claimed to be.
A wind rustled the branches and Tane Mahuta made his presence known.
Rua asked Tane Mahuta for his help.
Rua got told that she had done her best. 
“Ohh stop that squabbling!” said Rua .
Tane Mahuta separated the brothers forever
So from then on, the forest was peaceful and there was no squabbling. 

Thursday, August 1, 2019

setting description


Sana
Paragraph 1 - The weather and atmosphere
It was a hot, sweltering day. There were beautiful, vibrant houses that glowed brightly in the sun . The sea was scorching hot and the concrete floor was white and boiling.The shiny blue roof tops were sunburnt from the blistering sun. The tall mountains were keeping guard of this beautiful place.

Paragraph 2 - The houses
The concrete floors and walls were white, cold and hard. The ground was bumpy but some parts weren't. The walls of the houses were a clean white and the roofs were a bright blue colour.  The roofs shone dazzlingly in the sun. The windows were very intricate. Some of the houses were tall and vibrant but some houses were plane ordinary colour

Paragraph 3 - The ocean 
The sizzling, clear, blue ocean shone brightly. The boats made huge amounts of bubble beneath the ocean as it moved around. The small waves gently hit the rocks on the shore . The shallow end of the water  was light blue and clear but the deep end was dark blue but you couldn't see anything in it  .   

Paragraph 4 - The overall feeling of the place

I think that this place is beautiful, calm, peaceful, joyful and  there are lots of things to do.  If anyone would want to come here it would be me.





Monday, July 29, 2019

the task- we had to make a prediction on the story the force and see if our prediction was right

The force
One day Mum, Dad, Max and Harper went on a picnic , on a wooden bridge. Under the wooden bridge was a lake. The children   splashed into the water. And in the water there was a human cannonball.. Everyone was excited but Harper was scared of the water. Max and some other children stood in line to take turns on the cannonball.. Max was first in line and a pushy kid was behind and pushy kid told Max that he wanted to be first in line and pushed Max out of the way Then Pushy Kid said to Harper “ You are such a scaredy cat”. Harper felt embarrassed and made an excuse to go to the toilet. On the way Harper meet the legendary Yoda who was a Jetti master and he was in connection with the force. Yoda asked Harper what was wrong and Harper explanied that pushy kid was being mean to her. So then Yoda decided to have a discussion with the kids. And then they were all happy and jumped with great joy.
                        The end!!!!!! By sana and vrushti 





We  give our prediction a 2/10 because  that we said they went on the picnic was right  and he did meet Yoda when he was going to the bathroom but the rest was wrong. 


Wednesday, July 24, 2019

My speech judging sheet

Speech Judging Sheet 


Name:    Sana       Topic: bullying should stop                  
                    
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2 3           4 5
Structure

  
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.

0
Delivery

  
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.
3
Content 
  
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.
2
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)
3
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.

2:34

5


Next time I need to …
Have more hand  gestures

Teacher Comment 

Well done Sana.  You put in a lot of effort to write and deliver a good speech.  You memorised your speech well and maintained good eye contact. Your introduction, with dialogue and speech of what some bullies might say, captured your audience's attention.  Next step: Try to speak a bit louder.

speech-bullying should stop

“Give me your lunch money!”
“Get out of my way!”
“Haha… I knew you would drop the ball, you’re terrible at netball.”
“Don’t sit in my seat, or else!”```
“You can’t play with us, go away!”

You may have had some of these things said to you throughout your life and it doesn’t feel good, does it?  Sometimes people can be mean and nasty but this behaviour should not be tolerated. I firmly believe that bullying should stop!  Bullying is when someone or a group of people seek harm, to intimidate or torment someone they see as weak or an easy target. It is important to note that a one time incident is not bullying.  Bullying is when someone repeatedly hurts or upsets a person over a period of time. Bullying can happen anywhere, at any time! It can happen face to face or even online. I believe bullies have no place in this world.  Bullying makes kids hate school and makes people upset. WE DON”T HAVE TO PUT UP WITH THIS! WE CAN MAKE IT STOP!

Bullying makes people upset!

If you are getting bullied you might feel anxious, depressed, lonely or just feel like crying alot and you will not be able to concentrate in class because you will be thinking a lot about the bully. When the bully approaches or upsets you, you might also be thinking, why me?  Bullying can make students feel lonely, unhappy and frightened. Students who witness bullying can also feel worried and uncomfortable at school, fearing that they will also become a target. Children can’t do well at school if they are worried or feel unsafe!


Bad for health!
Kids who are being bullied can experience negative physical,   and mental health issues. Kids who are bullied are more likely to hate school and lose interest in activities. Bullying is a big problem, it can make kids feel hurt, scared, sick and lonely.  Bullies might hit, kick or push to hurt people and they could also use words to call names. Bullying can make kids not want to play outside or go to school. Studies show children and young people who are bullied are more likely to be depressed, lonely or anxious they also can have low self- esteem and struggle academically, dislike school and miss classes.  They can distrust peers and have problems making friends and experience declined mental and emotional health. 

So, what can you do to stop being bullied or what can you do if someone is being bullied? 
You can take action to stop bullying happening to you. It is important to do something about it because ignoring it gives silent approval. It is important that you don't dismiss the feelings of the person that is experiencing bullying and make sure they feel like they have power in their hands and that you will support them.  Persuade them to tell an adult they trust about the bullying, such as their parents or their teacher. Hopefully the bully will then face the consequences of their actions and change their behaviour.  




Conclusion
So overall, I hope you have agreed with me.  So if you see someone bullying or if you are being bullied, get help!  Don’t put up with it! You deserve to be happy, healthy and treated with respect.



www.kidshealth.nz



maths-dot plot




This is my dot plot it shows the the colour 24 people in the class likeed